{"id":967,"date":"2016-04-17T14:04:15","date_gmt":"2016-04-17T18:04:15","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/?page_id=967"},"modified":"2016-05-04T22:28:10","modified_gmt":"2016-05-05T02:28:10","slug":"student-work-samples","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/student-work-samples\/","title":{"rendered":"Student Work Samples"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>For this unit, there were five\u00a0means that students could use to demonstrate learning: bluebook journals, SAT writing, structured in-class conversations, weekly performances, and the final unit essay.<\/p>\n<h1>(1) Bluebook Samples<\/h1>\n<p>Students were tasked with keeping bluebook journals that contained answers to in-class questions as well as character charts. They had 3-4 assignments per week in the journals, which were collected on a random day each week an assessed for a reading comprehension\/quiz grade. See some samples below:<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_1051\" style=\"width: 778px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6360.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-1051\" class=\"wp-image-1051 size-large\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6360-768x1024.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6360\" width=\"768\" height=\"1024\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6360-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6360-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6360-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 768px) 100vw, 768px\" \/><\/a><p id=\"caption-attachment-1051\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">From an L1 ELL<\/p><\/div>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6358.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-1049\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6358-225x300.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6358\" width=\"225\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6358-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6358-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6358-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 225px) 100vw, 225px\" \/><\/a> <a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6359.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-1050\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6359-225x300.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6359\" width=\"225\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6359-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6359-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6359-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 225px) 100vw, 225px\" \/><\/a> <a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6361.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-1052\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6361-225x300.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6361\" width=\"225\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6361-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6361-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6361-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 225px) 100vw, 225px\" \/><\/a> <a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6362.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-1053\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6362-225x300.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6362\" width=\"225\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6362-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6362-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6362-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 225px) 100vw, 225px\" \/><\/a> <a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6363.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-1054\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6363-225x300.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6363\" width=\"225\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6363-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6363-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6363-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 225px) 100vw, 225px\" \/><\/a> <a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6364.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-1055\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6364-225x300.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6364\" width=\"225\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6364-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6364-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6364-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 225px) 100vw, 225px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_1056\" style=\"width: 778px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6365.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-1056\" class=\"wp-image-1056 size-large\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6365-768x1024.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6365\" width=\"768\" height=\"1024\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6365-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6365-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6365-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 768px) 100vw, 768px\" \/><\/a><p id=\"caption-attachment-1056\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Insightful Work Became the Norm for Several Students<\/p><\/div>\n<h1>(2) SAT Writing<\/h1>\n<p>For a couple student samples, see the <a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/growth-in-student-learning\/evidence\/\">Evidence<\/a>\u00a0portion\u00a0of the Growth in Student Learning Section, all the way at the bottom.<\/p>\n<h1>(3) Structured In-Class Conversations<\/h1>\n<p>One formative assessment strategy involved putting students into heterogeneous groups of 3-4, giving them a key passage to close-read, allowing them time to brainstorm\/write down ideas, and then having them share out. I call this process &#8220;First Responder,&#8221; since all the other groups could be called on to offer a first response to the commentary of the starting group. We then proceed to other groups. See a clip of this below:<\/p>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" width=\"920\" height=\"518\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/OW9NTUVa_0A?feature=oembed\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen><\/iframe><\/p>\n<p>See the passages and short-hand directions:\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/Streetcar-First-Responder.pdf\">Streetcar First Responder<\/a><\/p>\n<h1>(4) Weekly Performances<\/h1>\n<p>See the <a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/video-commentary\/\">Video &amp; Commentary<\/a> portion of this section.<\/p>\n<h1>(5) Final Unit Essays<\/h1>\n<p>I saw dramatic improvement in essays from previous units. I was first impressed that 15 students turned in essays on time, over the 6 from the previous unit. I was also impressed that they integrated quotes better, analyzed more effectively, and used academic vocabulary. My students really impressed me on their ability to think deeply, and a few examples are found below.<\/p>\n<p>First, an ELL student who grew exponentially this year and is now in line to take AP English next year:<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6497.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-1097 size-large\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6497-768x1024.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6497\" width=\"768\" height=\"1024\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6497-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6497-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6497-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 768px) 100vw, 768px\" \/><\/a> <a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6498.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-1098 size-large\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6498-768x1024.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6498\" width=\"768\" height=\"1024\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6498-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6498-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6498-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 768px) 100vw, 768px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Next, a student on an IEP who worked exceedingly hard on her essay. This student crafted an original thesis that she was proud of, one that pushed her to the point of tears during rough draft writing. But she persevered:<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6492.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-1090 size-large\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6492-768x1024.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6492\" width=\"768\" height=\"1024\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6492-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6492-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6492-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 768px) 100vw, 768px\" \/><\/a> <a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6493.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-1091 size-large\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6493-768x1024.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6493\" width=\"768\" height=\"1024\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6493-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6493-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6493-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 768px) 100vw, 768px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Finally, a student who rarely spoke in class, but who sought me out not once, but five times to help revise her essay. The results speak for themselves:<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6494.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-1093 size-large\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6494-768x1024.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6494\" width=\"768\" height=\"1024\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6494-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6494-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6494-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 768px) 100vw, 768px\" \/><\/a> <a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6495.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-1094 size-large\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6495-768x1024.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6495\" width=\"768\" height=\"1024\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6495-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6495-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6495-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 768px) 100vw, 768px\" \/><\/a> <a href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6496.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-1095 size-large\" src=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6496-768x1024.jpg\" alt=\"IMG_6496\" width=\"768\" height=\"1024\" srcset=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6496-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6496-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/416\/2016\/04\/IMG_6496-113x150.jpg 113w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 768px) 100vw, 768px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Overall, every single student who turned in an essay earned a higher mark than their previous essay. They really did earn it!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>For this unit, there were five\u00a0means that students could use to demonstrate learning: bluebook journals, SAT writing, structured in-class conversations, weekly performances, and the final unit essay. (1) Bluebook Samples Students were tasked with keeping bluebook journals that contained answers to in-class questions as well as character charts. They had &#8230; <a class=\"continue-reading-link\" href=\"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/student-work-samples\/\"> Continue reading<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":646,"featured_media":0,"parent":0,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"ngg_post_thumbnail":0,"footnotes":""},"class_list":["post-967","page","type-page","status-publish","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/967","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/646"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=967"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/967\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/wordpress.clarku.edu\/mat16-nporcella\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=967"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}